Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Sample Answer 1:
Dear Mr. Simpson,
Dear Mr. Simpson,
My name is Md. Arif and I am working in a bank. I am glad to inform you that recently I moved into my new house and it is next to your home. To celebrate my new living place, on the next Sunday at evening I am going to call a music with dinner party. However, I am a little bit tense because sometimes loudness of music may hamper your audibility.
I will never do anything that will deteriorate daily life of my neighbor. To prioritize my neighbor’s appeasement, I curtailed the time duration of music session. It will hold only for 30 minutes.
Anyway, my friends and relatives will join this party. I am inviting you to attend the program. It is essential to build up a trust relationship with you. So, you are welcome in my party and I am also eagerly waiting to meet with you.
My program will start at 8PM. If you have a free time, please come early in the ceremony. We can share with each other about our family and social life. Ok, see you at the party.
Best wishes,
Arif
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.226 7.5
More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 191 200
No. of Characters: 780 1000
No. of Different Words: 119 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.084 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.318 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.226 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.167 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4