WRITE ONE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF STUDYING ABROAD
Today, the number of people who want to live abroad increase significantly. So they choose to study in another country where they can improve their life. However, in my point of view I personally believe that this trend is both positive and negative. There is one of the disadvantages of studying abroad. Living in another country is often expensive. We have to pay a lot, not only for school fees but also for our living cost. Therefore, financial may become the big deal. Consequently, it distracts our mind from studying to earning money. Despite the negative mentioned above, studying abroad brings a wide range of benefits. The important advantage is we have a great chance to see how beautiful the world is. By studying abroad, you will discover a brand-new country with incredible views, cultures,...We also get the opportunity to see new terrains, natural wonders,...
In conclusion, in my opinion this trend has both beneficial and detrimental effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10759493671 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90779221541 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715189873418 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2587831068 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250706502936 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103047702183 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188779168195 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132298701348 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132298701348 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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