Writing task 1 the pie chart below show units of electricity production by fuel source in australia and france in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Writing task 1 the pie chart below show units of electricity production by fuel source in australia and france in 1980 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

A glance at these provided pie charts reveals the amount of fuel source used in both Australia and France from 1980 to 2000.

On balance, during the period shown, both the total electricity production in both Australia and France saw a noticeable rise. Moreover, similar to their total units were, the figure for each fuel source was remarkably exceptional.

The largest segment in the pie chart of Australia in 1980 belonged to coal with 50 units followed by that in natural gas, hydropower, and nuclear power. Besides, the units of coal electricity rose rapidly by 80 units and consistently ranked first in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure for nuclear power in France increased up to nine times.

In France, electricity production by coal and gas shared a comparable figure, with accurately 25 units, and accounted the biggest one in 1980. Ultimately, number of coal usage saw a modest growth to 25 units as same as that for oil, whereas units of natural gas and hydropower fell to the minimum threshold.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arable figure, with accurately 25 units, and accounted the biggest one in 1980. U...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, moreover, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98224852071 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67319439593 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0231382337 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252688306137 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109023134459 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617072935063 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159543832542 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579333387295 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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