You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of visitor in four different tourist spots in the UK and the table highlights the percentage of tourist attracted to the various sites in Theme Parks in the survey result in 1999.
Overall, most people visited the theme parks and museum and galleries whereas lest popular site of attraction was wildlife parks and zoos. Blackpool pleasure beach had significant visitation in theme parks as opposed to Chessington world of adventure and legoland, windsor which showed less number of tourists.
Given closer look at pie chart, The two most popular tourist attraction were theme parks and, museums and galleries which showed a difference of just 1% ( 38% and 37% respectively). About 16% people visited historic houses and monuments. The least visited site was wildlife parks and zoos which were visited by 9% people.
In regard to the table, among the options of theme parks almost half (47%) of the tourist choose to go to blackpool pleasure beach. Alton towers and pleasureland, Southport showed little difference (1%) in visitor proportion. Chessington world of adventure and legoland, windsor both had exactly same number of tourist, one tenth of total percentage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eme Parks in the survey result in 1999. Overall, most people visited the theme p...
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...ies which showed a difference of just 1% 38% and 37% respectively. About 16% peop...
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...tourist, one tenth of total percentage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29015544041 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67758866518 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9824861621 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154533635354 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702084334606 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486480361205 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107082588513 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518921472167 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.