You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You shoul

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart illustrates the monthly precipitation rates whereas the line graph demonstrates the temperature variation in Kolkata over a year period.

Overall, the highest recorded temperature can be seen in the month of May while the lowest can be observed in January and December. On the other hand, most rainfall occurs in the rainy season (June to August) as opposed to the least in winter (November to February). However, there is a positive correlation between the warmer temperature and the increased rate of precipitation.

Given a close look at the bar chart of the provided climograph, the most significant rate of precipitation recorded is 340% in the month of July. The months of August, September, and June are next in line reported in descending order of 330%, 290%, and 255% respectively. Conversely, pouring is dramatically less than 50% or below at the beginning of the year (January to April) as well as the end (November to December).

With regard to the line graph of the climograph, the highest temperature of 32 degrees C is recorded in the month of May compared to the lowest of 20 degrees C in January. Commencing from March, the temperature starts to go up from 25 degrees C, reaches its peak in May, then fluctuates for a while, and further hits 25 degrees C in November.

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Average: 5.6 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and the increased rate of precipitation Given a close look at the bar chart of t...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, whereas, while, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74774774775 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8841354261 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 222.0 22.4926829268 987% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1054.0 112.824112599 934% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 222.0 22.9334400587 968% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 5.23603664747 2158% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107064672332 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107064672332 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657367703467 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00616242665709 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 111.9 13.2329268293 846% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -145.39 61.2550243902 -237% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 88.7 10.3012195122 861% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.42 8.06136585366 216% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.4329268293 525% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 90.8 10.9970731707 826% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.0658536585 542% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and the increased rate of precipitation Given a close look at the bar chart of t...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, whereas, while, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74774774775 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8841354261 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 222.0 22.4926829268 987% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1054.0 112.824112599 934% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 222.0 22.9334400587 968% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 5.23603664747 2158% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107064672332 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107064672332 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657367703467 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00616242665709 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 111.9 13.2329268293 846% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -145.39 61.2550243902 -237% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 88.7 10.3012195122 861% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.42 8.06136585366 216% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.4329268293 525% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 90.8 10.9970731707 826% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.0658536585 542% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.