You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line chart provides information about the international food and oil price shift over a period of 11 years (2000-2011).

Overall, as can be seen from the chart, the two figures underwent multitudes of erratic fluctuations. While the food index hit the peak at the end of the period, the oil price was highest in an interval between 2008 and 2009.

The money spent on buying food reached circa 90 points in 2000; subsequently, it experienced positive growth. However, in 2002, abruptly there was a decline in the points. For the next eight years, the food price index climbed constantly and encountered another fall in 2009. After that, it rocketed rapidly, reaching almost 240 points in 2011.

On the other hand, at the beginning of the period, the ratio of oil price was higher than that of food. Nevertheless, in those ensuing years, its proportion kept being outraced by the other counterpart. Only in two years 2006-2007 and about 2008 did the oil price figure exceed the food index. Throughout those other years, it was overshadowed again despite having quite similar patterns with the other.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62017792514 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637837837838 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.5427805559 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148838552629 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562346561893 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562521760179 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101181126414 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420289194932 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.