You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given line graph depicts the changes in the prices of food and oil worldwide from 2000 to 2011.
Overall, despite their fluctuation several times, both of these two items experienced an upward trend for the first 8 years, followed by an upturn during the last 3 years in the examined period.
As can be seen from the graph, starting at about 92 points in the index, the global price of food remained stable from around 80 to 100 points over the 2000 to 2004 period. Then, there was a gradual increase in the points of food in the next 2 years, amounting to over 150 points in the late 2006, followed by a moderate decline in 2007 and a sharp rise to over 220 points in the middle of 2008. After a plunge to its lowest point at under 120 points in 2009, the food price rise again to over 180 points in 2011.
The same trend was observed with the average oil price in the world. With only 20$ per barrel in 2000, the oil price saw a significant increase up to over 120$ per barrel. It then witnessed an increase to over 50 $ before gaining the increase again to its peak at nearly 140$ in 2011
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
...erage oil price in the world. With only 20$ per barrel in 2000, the oil price saw a...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$120'.
Suggestion: $120
...e saw a significant increase up to over 120$ per barrel. It then witnessed an increa...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
.... It then witnessed an increase to over 50 $ before gaining the increase again to it...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$140'.
Suggestion: $140
...he increase again to its peak at nearly 140$ in 2011
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28229665072 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1046380054 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574162679426 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2367830877 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140917478025 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748871533379 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621114339278 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985497564877 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742884576643 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.