You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the number of passengers at a different time of the day in an underground station in London.

Overall, it can be seen from the given illustration that there are two major peaks of people; one in the morning and the other is in the evening. While the number of people fluctuates through the rest of the day, there may be a busy hour in the middle of the day.

Given a close look at the data, the lowest number of people in the station which is 100, can be seen as early as 6.00 am and also at 16.00 pm. In the morning the figure soon climbs to a peak of 400 at 8.00 am similar to another peak of just close to 400 at 18.00 pm. Likewise, the number of people shows a sharp decline after both peak and reaches below 200 at 10.00 am and 125 at 20.00 pm respectively.

On the other hand, the rest of the day depicts fluctuation in passenger’s number. After 10.00 am, the number starts rising gradually and hits 300 at 14.00 pm before a sharp drop of 100. The passenger number decreases significantly after 20.00 pm.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decreases significantly after 20.00 pm.
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, look, may, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32828282828 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42654036712 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5446281562 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124916649277 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695175222976 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558418345216 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980668359148 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665356382805 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.