You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the significant changes that transformed a small fishing village into a European tourist resort over a gap of thirty years, from 1974 to 2004.
In 1974, the fishing village was comprised of only a handful of residents, merely 12000. The town was formed nearly the harbour as most citizen earned their livelihood from the sea. They used to dock their boats on the sea beach. The nearest village was separated by a forest area who were depended on the olive plantation. Another community of shepards could be found near the hills who used to own sheep and goats. The uphills were covered with green trees.
Although the original fishing village still persisted in 2004, the changes in the surrounding was vast. The population had increased to a 80000.The length of sea beached also increased over the years and was regularly visited by the tourists. The lands next to the beach including the woodland was used to construct hotels with 50000 beds to accommodate upcoming guests. Behind the hotels, where the farming village used to be, a golf course was built. Next to it, a farmland can be found where a olives used to grow. This particular farmland was used to grow fruits and vegetables that were consumed by the hotels. Behind these to particular spots, a small village was present which hosted the tourists shops. Finally a modern constructed road can be found that lead to the nearest town from the beach.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: WAS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprised' or 'consisted of' or 'was composed of'?
Suggestion: comprised; consisted of; was composed of
...o 2004. In 1974, the fishing village was comprised of only a handful of residents, merely 120...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...The population had increased to a 80000.The length of sea beached also increased ov...
^^^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was regularly visited by the tourists. The lands next to the beach including the w...
^^^
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...xt to it, a farmland can be found where a olives used to grow. This particular fa...
^
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a olive' or simply 'olives'?
Suggestion: a olive; olives
...xt to it, a farmland can be found where a olives used to grow. This particular farmland ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 712, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...resent which hosted the tourists shops. Finally a modern constructed road can be found ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, still, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87346938776 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46840594413 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.905878621 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102937748403 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369539863147 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477281202274 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933629542192 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559032524291 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.