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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.
Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries?
You should write at least
The table illustrates the statistical report of the United Nations regarding four different determinants (social and economic) of four countries of the world namely Canada, Japan, Peru, and Zaire in 1994.
Broadly speaking, all socioeconomic indicators ranked higher for the developed nations like Canada and Japan whereas for developing and underdeveloped countries like Peru and Zaire indicators were pretty low. Overall, Japan is ahead of every nation in most of the indicators, while Zaire had reported the least.
Given a close look at the data, Japan had the highest annual income of $US 15,760 as opposed to Zaire which ranked the lowest at $US 130. Similarly, Canada and Peru held the second-highest and lowest annual income of $US11,100 and $US160 respectively. In regards to the Adult literacy rate, developed nations (Canada and Japan) showed exactly the same figure of 99% whereas Zaire had half the rate as Peru.
On the other hand, people of Canada consumed about 450 calories more than that of Japan while the calorie intake for Peru and Zaire remained below 2000 calories. The developed nations (Canada and Japan) had almost similar rates of life expectancy of 76% to 78%. Conversely, developing and underdeveloped countries Peru and Zaire reported life expectancy in their fifties.
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... whereas Zaire had half the rate as Peru On the other hand people of Canada consu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, look, regarding, second, similarly, so, whereas, while, as for, broadly speaking, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16425120773 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64706088274 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526570048309 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 207.0 22.4926829268 920% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1069.0 112.824112599 947% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 207.0 22.9334400587 903% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 115.0 5.23603664747 2196% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144243347688 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144243347688 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11092128874 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073950373251 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.4 13.2329268293 804% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -147.09 61.2550243902 -240% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 85.2 10.3012195122 827% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.72 8.06136585366 220% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 11.4329268293 542% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.8 10.9970731707 771% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 85.0 11.0658536585 768% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.