You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words.

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the way in which greenhouse gases are produced and how these gases trap heat from the sun.
Overall, there are two the general stages dealing both with trapping heat by greenhouse gases and the generation of extra carbon dioxide, regarding at the same time nature and human phenomenon.
The first reason is created by human activities. One of the most common ways of the production of extra carbon dioxide derives from burning fossil fuels which are consequences of car and truck traffic releasing toxic substances into the Earth’s atmosphere, joined with industrial processes of power plants or factories. In addition, the act of cutting trees brings the worst conditions, considering that trees directly contribute to the process of absorbing carbon dioxide.
The second stage takes place in the atmosphere, the nature heat process begins with the energy produced by the sun. Then, the heat energy partially radiates into space, is reflected directly off the atmosphere by clouds or by Earth’s ground. Instead, the greenhouse gases trap the heat, warming up the environment.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, second, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38857142857 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75346757262 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.747659135 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124351456169 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607953384059 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684188368011 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977657981344 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744690740649 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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