After being involved in an accident you were looked after by a person you did not know before Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude In your letter Introduce yourself and let him her know why you are writing Express your appreciation A

Essay topics:

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Sir,
I am Sayu whom you had admitted and taken care in the NHS hospital fortnight ago. I am writing this letter to you to share my sincere thanks and gratitude for all your help and care.
I am a software engineer and it was a tedious day on that day of accident so I lost my control while I was driving at that night. I was very lucky that you happen to see me at a pathetic condition on the road side. Your first-aid and intellectual action to admit me in nearby hospital saved my life. Additionally, I came to know, you have spent more time beside me to look after my recovery until my family member visits. I really appreciate you generosity to extend you help for me. Therefore, as a token of love and sincerity, I would like to invite you and your family to my home for a lunch on coming weekend. Kindly let me know if this weekend would suits you better or please suggest anyone of your weekend.
I am looking forward to hearing a reply from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sayu

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...trol while I was driving at that night. I was very lucky that you happen to see m...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...indly let me know if this weekend would suits you better or please suggest anyone of ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27659574468 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43149695781 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9633054073 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325158657179 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130324831614 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712765435361 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206184495432 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480440595738 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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