The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter
• Give some details about the training course
• Describe what kind of equipment you will need for the course
• Ask some questions about the facilities at conference centre.
Dear sir,
I am inscribing this epistle to draw your attention about the bi-monthly training of our company employees regarding good manufacturing practices at your designated conference hall.
This training held on next Saturday and whole agenda is about educating staff about the importance of wearing personal protective equipment’s such as gloves, mask, beard nets, gowns respectively. However, work related scenarios represented by certain workers to educate them about importance of this concept at their workplace.
Further, this session needs good seating arrangements for approximately 100 people, a large center table and a projector screen. I bring my personal laptop for the presentation. There must be tea and snacks in the afternoon for the staff as they became hungry by that time. Apart from this, I particularly insist on providing tea/ coffee containers and few dim lights at the stage as well as complete silence at the center in order to conduct the whole training successfully. Moreover, we need a registration chamber at the entrance to mark attendance of each staff member.
I hope your center provide the related facilities as I mentioned above. I am interested in hearing the reply within 1-2 business days.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mark attendance of each staff member. I hope your center provide the related f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4595959596 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05201397559 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.343507049 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163443377609 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061854093956 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518179495903 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936909737886 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486185043396 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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