During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Lee,
I am Monika, and I hope you remember me from our last meeting. I was sitting next to you in the flight from New Delhi to Chicago and we had a conversation about your recently opened restaurant chain in Chicago. You were discussing that you are actively looking for management staff for your newly open restaurants and when I told you about my educational background you suggested me to contact you further via email.
So I am writing this email regarding the same context. As I told you earlier I am having a Hotel Management Degree from Fisher college, India. Plus, I am holding special advance certificates in food and hygiene which I am sure could benefit your business. I am currently working in a three start hotel and is responsible for managing staff, accounting and public dealing. Although I am having a good time here but would definitely like to expand my knowledge and experience in some new environment. However, I am more interested in creative and new modern way of catering, which I have heard of and after having a discussion with you I am sure your restaurants chain is expert for. Therefore I think I could be a perfect candidate as per your requirement in your restaurant.
Please feel free to call me at 1234567890 should you have any questions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Monika Goswami
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 683, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e your restaurants chain is expert for. Therefore I think I could be a perfect candidate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75949367089 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80895427962 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8408585629 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7692307692 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207479252831 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744184156851 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677173790077 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137550679132 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777408648894 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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