During a recent plane journey you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants Write a letter to this businessman In your letterr

Dear Mr. James,

I am writing this letter to remind you about a job vacancy possibly that I met you on the airplane during travelling from London to Bangkok, flight number TG 345. Hopefully, you are fine in your health and business.
First of all, I am so much interested in your restaurant branches, particularly in the Rock pool Pub and Restaurant, that I would like to apply in a restaurant manager.
Secondly of all, I have been a restaurant manager in Samui Pavilion for 12 years, and I have been in charge with the staff and customers service area to collaborate with the kitchen staff smoothly. I will organize and manage your staff and business effectively by spending to my capacities.
Finally, if you need further information. I will give you my contact number 0481721172 and my e-mail jojonathan999@Hotmail.com. Please feel free to contact me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Noppong Ampai

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Yours sincerely, Noppong Ampai
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, mind you, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01265822785 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22603572847 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0742297576 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2530913495 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089675777055 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611192162618 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127466027864 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829624750605 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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