A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in your city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
suggest an interesting part of the city to live in
describe the public transport in your city
say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Prem,
I am happy to provide advice which you have asked for, I am thrilled to know that you are moving to Hyderabad for work. It is ideal to look for housing in the city center which is Banjara hills for my city, where you can get different kinds of experiences around it such as; shopping, clubs, and live music. In addition to it, there is a music festival going in this area with the city’s top 10 bands will perform for the next 4 weeks.
The medium of a commute is easy for you here once shifted as this city offers various transport facilities like air, metro, local bus, and taxi.
Furthermore, there is a club called ‘Film Nagar club’ which I often go to weekends is the right choice to get to know new people. Since you are an extrovert, this is the ideal choice post work to hangout. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Best Regards,
Venkat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...m for the next 4 weeks. The medium of a commute is easy for you here once shifted as th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41104294479 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23113913922 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7013994122 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182723782066 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689710518139 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530580935761 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114189358201 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626859720139 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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