A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.In your lettergive contact details for when you are awaygive instructions about how to care for your petdescribe other household duties

Essay topics:

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties

Hi Anita,

Hope you are doing well. Thanks for accepting the invite to my house in my absence. You don't know how much I am relief after hearing yes from you because I was concern for my cat.

I am traveling to attend a conference in New Delhi from 7th of August to 13th of August and will be staying in hotel Hyatt, Indirapuram. I expecting whole day busy in conference so might not pick up your calls. Feel free to leave a text incase I don't answer your calls. I will try to return your call as soon as I get some free time. Kindly feed my cat with handful of biscuits twice a day with milk, in the morning at around 8:00 AM and in the evening anytime after 6:00 PM. You can find cat biscuits in the drawer next to the fridge, on your left and milk inside the fridge.

Also I would like you to take care of my plants in balcony. Watering them once a day will be enough because this is a rainy season. Please water them in the morning after having breakfast and that's it. Thanks again for your stay.

I look forward to meeting you soon and then we will have party.

Warm regards
Monika Goswami

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e invite to my house in my absence. You dont know how much I am relief after hearing...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...be staying in hotel Hyatt, Indirapuram. I expecting whole day busy in conference ...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lls. Feel free to leave a text incase I dont answer your calls. I will try to return...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...our left and milk inside the fridge. Also I would like you to take care of my pla...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... the morning after having breakfast and thats it. Thanks again for your stay. I lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19158878505 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.059072793 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7513188878 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228061684674 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075556746689 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627917082989 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129040582274 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338238881252 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.95 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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