A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
- describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Kevin,
How are you? How is Julia and your lovely children? I’m really melancholy that I couldn’t keep in touch with you. Because, these days I am very busy and this holiday I should go to my own country. Anyway, I’m so thankful that you accepted my request to care about my own house and pet.
In general, you probably need to know information about my contact. Also, u can send message to me via E-mail, whenever you want. In emergency situation, you can call me through this number: +1(818)677 52 73.
Regarding to care about my dog, I have purchased many conserve recently and I’ve put them on the shelf near the fridge. They are included poultry and ham that are very beneficial for it. Also, you should change its water and leave it in the yard around 1 hour a day, because it needs to walk away. In addition, if it gets sick, you should call pet-clinic and I wrote its number on the sticky paper on the board that it’s located in the kitchen too.
As you know better, each house has different domestic chores. As I keep many amazing flowers in the dining room and they need to care and I beg you that check them too.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that your kindness is too great and anyone won’t do it for others.
I’m looking forward to coming back soon and compensate your kindness too.
Best regards,
Ardalan Hajmehdi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conserve seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conserves'.
Suggestion: many conserves
... to care about my dog, I have purchased many conserve recently and I've put them on the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, look, really, regarding, so, in addition, in conclusion, in general, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62601626016 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40017845856 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.534038603 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9411764706 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225706381215 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726583881288 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454138137393 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115851329644 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320375990932 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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