A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• request advise about a gift for his/her family
• ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
• find out about the food
Dear Mike,
Hope my message finds you well.
It has been a year since we met. Thanks for inviting me to visit Italy, a place not in my wish-list but I am excited to experience it though. I am planning to visit at the beginning of December this year. Thus, I need some details from you so that I could prepare my journey accordingly.
I still remember you would like Henko’s Softcake from Japan and I am going to buy for you from here. However, I insist you to suggest me suitable souvenir for your family. Besides, i have surfed on the internet to learn the climate during November in Italy. Nonetheless, I personally would like to hear from you not only dress suits for that season but also it is useful to participate in any activities.
Furthermore, i am on a strict diet. Therefore, I am interested to prefer only Vegetarian food for my whole meal. What is typical food in your place? So that I may pack my luggage with some vegetarian food items accordingly.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sayu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pate in any activities. Furthermore, i am on a strict diet. Therefore, I am in...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al. What is typical food in your place? So that I may pack my luggage with some vegetar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, look, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60962566845 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67334755584 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2418745293 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.4666666667 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223646364571 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745446045843 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472497503313 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120819781642 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473726511354 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.