Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
Nowadays, it is increasingly common for people to work for longer than expected. This trend is caused by several reasons. Consequently, there are numerous negative effects that will arise.
One prominent reason is that a lot of people are in major debt. They can be newlyweds who take out a loan to purchase houses or someone whose family member involves in gambles and have lost all the money. Therefore, they need to work hard to increase their income. For example, in some Vietnamese firms, the amount of money paid for workers on weekends can double that on weekdays. Another factor is that there is a “long-hour culture” at work in some countries. In this culture, no employees want to be the first to leave and the last to arrive. This is because managers can judge their workers on how long they stay and how hard-working they are at workplaces. For instance, nearly a quarter of Japanese companies have their employees work more than 80 hours of overtime per month because of this culture.
This trend has led to lots of detrimental effects on people’s well-being. Firstly, more and more people are under massive pressure because of overwork. If employees cannot handle the stress resulting from longer-hour working, in the worst cases, suicides can happen. It can be clearly seen in Japan and Korea where there is a large number of people committing suicide due to stress caused by overwork. Secondly, it reduces the productivity of workers. If people overwork for a long period of time, they are susceptible to fatigue. Working in tiredness can result in not solving problems smartly or not being able to come up with innovative ideas.
In conclusion, significant pressure and inefficiency are the two major effects, which result from working for longer to earn more money and credit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... seen in Japan and Korea where there is a large number of people committing suicide due to stress...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... workers. If people overwork for a long period of time, they are susceptible to fatigue. Worki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 937.175257732 161% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9801980198 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68517496279 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4624650073 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4210526316 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336725959596 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930849803599 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560729241137 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195031326319 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878550009561 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 41.2886597938 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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