Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts in the world. Agree or disagree
Most people believe that exhibition rooms should pay attention to national artworks which illustrate history and culture of this religion rather than international pieces of art. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement and I will explain in the essay.
First of all, it’s particularly important that the main mission for each country is artworks' conservation and development of them. Pieces of art describe tradition, culture, history, people’s life of each country through materials which made they have their own features by artists’ creations. Furthermore, art does not only works but also ideals, nation elites so pieces of art's protection illustrate the big love of inhabitants who live in this country.
Another point is the evolving global work of arts. Although these artworks illustrate art's development, international history, and human's struggles all around the world, but it extremely that these works actually make bored with customers because of popularity. Besides, most viewers when they visit exhibition rooms in another country, they want to discover new things which their country don't have and they want to gain more knowledge about the typical features of this country such as culture, history and inhabitants' life.
In conclusion, most people prefer concentration on national works than international pieces of art. Overall, I extremely agree with this opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57209302326 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88970122585 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2785998665 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 4.34317383033 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24209595662 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927705795313 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507119803522 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152322061996 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217077348742 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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