Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you to know about the parking I face in morning while I come to office. I spend almost half an hour to find comfortable parking else I suppose to keep my car in busy road which may cause either traffic congestion or an accident
I strongly believe that, we are going through the business down turn because of lack of sufficient parking space. Customers always prefer to stop their vehicle in a safe place so that they can shop without worrying about their car. For example, our competitor Al Othman Shop has lot of space to park for their visitors thus they have a major market share of current business than us especially in textiles.
To mitigate this concern, I do suggest if we clean and do some maintenance work in our basement we could have accommodate more than fifty cars at a time and in order to get more ideas about this please ask our engineer Mr. Thomson because he is going through similar situation like me.
I hope you can understand my situations and expect a positive reply in this grave concern.
Yours faithfully,
Rajan
Accountant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'accommodated'.
Suggestion: accommodated
...ance work in our basement we could have accommodate more than fifty cars at a time and in o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, while, for example, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60512820513 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47515464821 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707692307692 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1023324976 44.8134815571 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.285714286 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200177689258 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823423788103 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303877436423 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963854088322 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371891301017 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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