One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
describe why you want to work in that country
tell him/her about your skills and experience
ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)
Dear Alyna,
I hope you are doing well. It has been a long time since I last wrote to you. I have recently started looking for jobs in Canada, the country where you are currently residing. I was hoping you could guide me about the work environment there.
I have been searching for work for a while now. As you know, in my current job I have to work day in and night out with little wage,without any overtime. While searching for employment opportunities, I have come across several reviews that stated how work life balance is prioritized and about the various benefits of working in the IT related professions.
Being a project manager in an IT company for 4 years, I have experience in client communication and collaborating with various teams in order to delegates the tasks, which are the prime requirements in a management role. Besides I also have attained certifications related to my position.
However, I have been able to get very little information related to the salary and working hours. Can you tell me more about the salary structure of the jobs there? I know you belong to a different field, so if you can refer me to a site or a person who can give me further details, that would be fine too.
I can’t wait to hear from you and join you soon.
Your friend,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e me about the work environment there. I have been searching for work for a whil...
^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , without
...rk day in and night out with little wage,without any overtime. While searching for emplo...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...bout the various benefits of working in the IT related professions. Being a project m...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...rofessions. Being a project manager in an IT company for 4 years, I have experience...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ions. Being a project manager in an IT company for 4 years, I have experience in clie...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g a project manager in an IT company for 4 years, I have experience in client com...
^^
Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...rime requirements in a management role. Besides I also have attained certifications rel...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56465517241 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71489798632 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1481219098 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6428571429 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225774411104 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902850655822 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655663137086 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110934983361 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633644134873 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.