ou have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter,
1. provide information about yourself
2. give details of your previous work experience
3. say why the company should consider you for the job.
You do not need to write any addresses.
Begin you letter as follow:
Dear____
Dear Sir,
I have come across an advertisement for a vacancy of Finance Manager at Alfred Hitchcock Company. I have experience related to the job description published on the website Indeed.com and wish to apply for the position.
To briefly introduce you, I am a Chartered Accountant, which I have passed in the year 2005. I have 10 years of work experience in Manufacturing sector. At Steven Rocks and Company, my current entails consolidation of books of accounts and timely reporting to the key stakeholders. I manage a team size of 6 people and share amazing team rapport with them. Last year, I have received employee of the year award for implementation of ERP systems. It was a massive project and I along with my team managed to complete the task in 4 months’ time frame.
I understand that Alfred Hitchcock has currently many entities under the holding company. I believe, I am a perfect fit for the role as I have the expertise, required for the role and am, extremely passionate of the field and like to learn different business model.
I looking forward meeting you for an interview and demonstrating my abilities.
Many thanks and regards,
John Bramley
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the task in 4 months' time frame. I understand that Alfred Hitchcock has c...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to learn different business model. I looking forward meeting you for an inte...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... to learn different business model. I looking forward meeting you for an inte...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.955 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02948427954 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9692467126 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168686762754 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566750670061 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390773070087 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834374805838 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586505049472 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.