People have different opinions to avoid packing products. One group argues that it is individual responsibility but the other group says it is manufacturer responsibility to control the extra package. In my personal opinion, both of them should take initiative and stop such kind of wastage.
First and foremost thing who ever produce and sell packing items, they must consider environment safety. As we are very much aware the major problem in our society is due to lot of garbage. I have read few articles on this issue, as they were requesting to change the packing style. As we know how much money, effort we are spending to recycle the waste items. I have read news on this topic. As few countries were encouraged companies who ever follow garbage recycling process.
Secondly Individuals must not encourage over packed products. As we know how it is creating problems in terms of global warming. Recently one of the city started charging amount based on their wastage, as they need to spend a lot of effort to recycle this. We must create awareness with the help of social media, how we can avoid or ban these kinds of products.
Final conclusion of this issue, everyone must own the responsibility to reduce over packing products. There are proven facts available to get self motivation and predict the over package related things.
People have different opinions to avoid packing products. One group argues that it is individual responsibility but the other group says it is manufacturer responsibility to control the extra package. In my personal opinion, both of them should take initiative and stop such kind of wastage.
First and foremost thing who ever produce and sell packing items, they must consider environment safety. As we are very much aware the major problem in our society is due to lot of garbage. I have read few articles on this issue, as they were requesting to change the packing style. As we know how much money, effort we are spending to recycle the waste items. I have read news on this topic. As few countries were encouraged companies who ever follow garbage recycling process.
Secondly Individuals must not encourage over packed products. As we know how it is creating problems in terms of global warming. Recently one of the city started charging amount based on their wastage, as they need to spend a lot of effort to recycle this. We must create awareness with the help of social media, how we can avoid or ban these kinds of products.
Final conclusion of this issue, everyone must own the responsibility to reduce over packing products. There are proven facts available to get self motivation and predict the over package related things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ity to control the extra package. In my personal opinion, both of them should take initiative an...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they must consider environment safety. As we are very much aware the major proble...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... items. I have read news on this topic. As few countries were encouraged companies...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ust not encourage over packed products. As we know how it is creating problems in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25702811245 0.220444632235 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.18875502008 0.167888034529 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0883534136546 0.0606518309736 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0200803212851 0.0506257000042 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0722891566265 0.118615021944 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100401606426 0.107062808482 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0361445783133 0.041066498444 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64076983372 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361445783133 0.0385302599488 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00401606425703 0.00132118243153 304% => OK
Determiners: 0.0642570281124 0.0714148451538 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0240963855422 0.0191574576366 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0200803212851 0.00930345855455 216% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1346.0 1141.60824742 118% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.134020619 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9295154185 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356828193833 0.284621296913 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259911894273 0.211203875043 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185022026432 0.133321485273 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101321585903 0.0843313296314 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64076983372 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 66.3624728961 62.8969750728 106% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1333333333 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9597230451 44.7399317507 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 90.9928171075 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.613754768223 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 41.1245227606 37.5504026743 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 1.13073093955 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480259844134 0.331212695627 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0492739257977 0.0927372745006 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0493385947213 0.0736520305886 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470144223078 0.579516596996 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138582886935 0.180689518051 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155220550107 0.122183219658 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169130664959 0.0765303033291 221% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213259423899 0.211926503985 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0567204550656 0.0737400523855 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349821055795 0.203819188451 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.307241236566 0.067151250289 458% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.48453608247 472% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.