People in your area are having problems with their internet connection Write a letter to the company which provides the connection In your letter describe the problems explain how they are affecting people say what the company should do to help You do not

Essay topics:

People in your area are having problems with their internet connection.
Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter
• describe the problems
• explain how they are affecting people
• say what the company should do to help
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter like this
Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir / Madam,

I hope this letter finds you in good health.

In our area, we are using internet connection provided by your company. Since last two weeks we as well as other people in the area are facing disruption in internet services. There have been slower speed of browsing along with frequent disconnections.

Due to this problem we all are facing number of challenges. In this digital age, almost everything is integrated with each other via internet and our neighborhood is using smart home solution, poor internet connection is causing problems in integrating household devices. It is also causing communication problems.

Earlier, We had complained about this problem on helpline and lineman visited and inspected the problem. It is due to old copper wiring used for providing connections. We, hereby, requests you to kindly install connections using optic fiber cable for better connectivity and speed.

Kindly install optic fiber in our area at earliest to solve this matter.

Sincerely,
MM

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37888198758 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84057950728 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7445778198 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155049211293 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533427899414 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448104087373 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080895197341 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483178414566 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.