People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter,•Describe the problem.•Explain how that is affecting people.•Say what the company should do to help.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complaint about the internet connection issues in our area. From past one week, we are observing intermittent connectivity problem across the area and not getting any help from your customer care service after calling several times.

Furthermore, its very frustrating to the people who are working from home, due to this, they are travelling to office in huge traffic. Also, children are not able to complete their project works in regular basis and we are completely relying on internet cafe's as we can't stop children homework. Similarly, People are struggling to pay the bills while standing in queue, before they used to pay through online. Some people are unable to watch online movies and listen to online music.

As we discussed last time, due to plethora of connections in this area, you were unable to provide good services but you promised that installing amplifier will fix this issue, I request you to concentrate on the installing amplifier so that we can enjoy uninterrupted internet services.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...pletely relying on internet cafes as we cant stop children homework. Similarly, Peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6725879837 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691428571429 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8026293361 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12398123294 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524260202211 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403972059511 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843717754996 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598038327867 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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