On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you want them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regard as my terrible experience in my last work trip to Paris.
During that trip I have lost some of my wealthy belongings that are valuable not only for their costs but also for their memorials aspects. These loss items are my laptop and some of CDs for learning French that were in my backpack and also my little suitcase with its contents such as my clothes and one new pair shoes.
Last week, I had to go a mission for advertising of our new beauty product in Paris. In the airport when I received my boarding pass, I found out that airplane was overbooked so I had bumped to another airplane while my backpack and suitcase were transported by earlier airplane.I had only my carry-on bag with some certificates such as passport and driving licence and a little money. In destination's airport I pressed this point with related airline's staffs and they made me be sure that my belongings were safe and would be sent to my reserved hotel as soon as possible until 8 Pm. When I persecuted from the airline's staffs they felt sorry for loosing them.
Dealing the circumstance in mind, I trust you will kindly rectify my losses by full refund of the expenses of my missing items to buy them again.
I am waiting for your response.
your faithfully,
Sahar
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...se were transported by earlier airplane.I had only my carry-on bag with some cert...
^
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt with related airlines staffs and they made me be sure that my belongings were ...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...in. I am waiting for your response. your faithfully, Sahar
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5829787234 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49488748407 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5161727595 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811933021112 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450435224905 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395365656436 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549787227279 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306072473622 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...se were transported by earlier airplane.I had only my carry-on bag with some cert...
^
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt with related airlines staffs and they made me be sure that my belongings were ...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...in. I am waiting for your response. your faithfully, Sahar
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5829787234 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49488748407 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5161727595 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811933021112 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450435224905 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395365656436 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549787227279 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306072473622 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.