There will be a tradition celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English speaking country
Invite your friend
Explain what happened at the party
Describe addition and why it is important in your country
Say what is important for your friend
Dear Raman
Hello! How are you? I am fine . I hope you are also in good health . I am writing this letter to invite do you Traditional celebration Deepawali.this time I arrange grand party with his contribution of me and my friends.
It is a grand party. There are many friends are coming in this party and I arrange some special in new Couzines for dinner and sound system is also available for Nazim to create more crowd in party. This tradition is your to Shriram because 14 years later we are coming with family and that time peoples are make lots of happiness summer ban crackers or that it is important in my country.
It is very important to me and my friends and they are very busy in life. I would think that I have bring 10 days of jobs were celebrating even abroad countries are not to celebration this festival in proper way so that I will invite to you you will bring blessing to God.
Yours truly
Aman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raman Hello! How are you? I am fine . I hope y...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Raman Hello! How are you? I am fine . I hope you are also in good health . I ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ine . I hope you are also in good health . I am writing this letter to invite do ...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... . I hope you are also in good health . I am writing this letter to invite do yo...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n good health . I am writing this letter to invite do you Traditional celebration...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...busy in life. I would think that I have bring 10 days of jobs were celebrating even a...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: you
... in proper way so that I will invite to you you will bring blessing to God. Yours t...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... proper way so that I will invite to you you will bring blessing to God. Your...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40697674419 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43992423682 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6067021118 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210366398677 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069364032125 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626668359126 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11391082597 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358347256935 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.