Write a letter to friend inviting on family function what is the occasion what are your plans and why is it important that she should come

Essay topics:

Write a letter to friend inviting on family function. what is the occasion, what are your plans and why is it important that she should come

Dear Kiran,

Hope this letter finds you in good spirits. I feel happy writing to invite you to my brother's wedding next month.

First of all, my brother is getting married on 19 April of this year. The function will start a week before and I would be glad to see you with your family to attend all the events. The ceremony is organised as per the Indian culture and we have different days to celebrate based on the wedding theme. our family loves the countryside and so we have a big house in our native village where we are going to have a marriage party. The house is big enough to occupy all the guest and I am sure you would arrive at least a week before to be a part of our celebration.

As you are one of my bosom friends, I would love to see you at the wedding to bless the couple with your blessings.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours lovingly,
XYZ

Votes
Average: 4.6 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you to my brothers wedding next month. First of all, my brother is getting marr...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...o celebrate based on the wedding theme. our family loves the countryside and so we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, at least, i feel, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22941176471 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18726259216 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8059519124 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782239262206 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351623196499 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360011038828 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412643080002 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323719215026 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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