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Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request some details regarding your Tertiary Preparation Certificate program which I am planning to pursue this term.
Regarding my educational qualification, it consists of a Bachelor’s degree in Computer Science Engineering from Thapar University, Patiala, in 2010. I got 9.5 CGPA in the final exams.
After the completion of my Bachelor’s degree, I have worked in a company as a software engineer for three years; however, with time, I realized that for better job prospects, I should go for higher studies. Therefore, I want to get admitted to a reputed university in Canada for pursuing a Master’s degree. Because I have a long study gap, I believe that I should complete the tertiary preparation certificate before enrolling in the Master course.
I would really appreciate it if you can provide me all the necessary details regarding the course start and conferral date, tuition fee, and admission procedure.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchi Verma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich I am planning to pursue this term. Regarding my educational qualification, ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32544378698 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07886829727 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4892097256 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156382326728 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542429243677 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357384379202 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635635098632 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477281245669 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.