Write a letter to the planning manager to inform him that you are unhappy with the council's decision to pull down the historic building in your area due to lack of fund
- why it is important
- how it is useful in future
- suggest how to pay for repairs.
Dear Sir,
Recently, I have heard the news that municipal council is considering to demolish the Asiatic library building on North Road, Churchgate due lack of funds to maintain and renovate it. I am writing this letter to express my grievance and wish to suggest some creative ideas on raising funds for renovations.
The Asiatic library is 275 years old building built by British when they colonised India. this building now holds around 25000 manuscripts that predates 2000 B.C and also houses books sourced on various topics from around the world. this a functional library and is considered a warehouse, which provides an academician an extensive source of knowledge. I understand the building is in dilapidated and needs massive repair works. One way to restore the library building from its current state is raising awareness among the citizens about such historical heritage which the city owns and conduct paid tours. also, council could host charity drives, whereby popular and industry stalwarts people could offer patronage for such restoration program.
I hope the above suggestion may be useful and could be considered for repairing the building.
Yours’ sincerely
Rebecca Clark
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66959400927 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0284354603 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157405163091 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573299264497 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395997422111 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988385582132 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434478458505 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.