Write a letter to your friend asking him help to make a website

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend asking him help to make a website.

Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and great spirits. I came to know that you have learned website designing course; so, thought to ask your favor in creating website for my business.

As you know, I run a shop that sells ready-made garments for all age-groups. Since people started shopping online, the in-store selling is debilitating day by day. I think it's right time for me to get my business take a leap in technology, which is the only way to survive in competition. Therefore, I am planning to have an e-commerce site that can showcase my items and people can watch and buy them. As you are software professional and completed training on website development, I am sure you can help me in this area.

Admittedly, good design and easy buying on website would certainly prosper my business. Let me know if we can meet this weekend and discuss on the business-requirement. I will also take you to my shop, showing you different varieties and make you aware of the stock that I sale.

It would be great if you could come with your family. This way we can have family time together along with discussing business.

I look forward hearing from you soon.

Yours lovingly,

XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.7 (5 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83962264151 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7961912444 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2671177607 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0706159559268 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275567768052 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356809304141 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364256543867 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348797738012 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.