Write a letter to your friend telling him/her that you have won a photography competition. In your letter
– Describe the event.
– Describe the photograph you have sent for the competition.–
Invite him/her to the exhibition where your photograph is presented?
Dear Priya,
I hope this letter finds you well.
Firstly, the reason I am writing this letter is to share a good news with you. Last month, in my office, a photography event held where more than 100 people have participated. As you know about my passion for photography, hence, I have also shared one of the photos(photo) from my collection. Fortunately, among such talented people, I have managed to bag the first prize and couldn't resist to share my happiness with you.
However, if you can recall, the photo I have clicked of two school going children, when we have been to Manali two month...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...on I am writing this letter is to share a good news with you. Last month, in my office, a p...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...have managed to bag the first prize and couldnt resist to share my happiness with you. ...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: award-winning
...among many. Now the best part is, my award winning photo is being sent to one of the natio...
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o seeing you soon here. Best regards, Sonali
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67579908676 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54300596528 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648401826484 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2716751446 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7692307692 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216381711767 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752122471566 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033025420958 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114831067825 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334191348769 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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