Dear John,
I hope you are well. I was over the moon to hear that you won a two-way airway ticket to Italy and I’d like to share some amazing experiences of me in Rome.
There are two amazing places you should visit. Van Gogh art gallery is really worthy visiting. I believe you will be mesmerised by beauty of buildings as well as amazing watercolor paintings. Moreover, Italian War Museum is one of the must-seen places there. There are more than one million types of firearms, many amazing and historical soldier uniforms there.
You will find few vegetarian restaurants in the city centre. Julia’s Mediterranean Salad Restaurant is less affluent and offers not only delicious salads but also non-diary healthy drinks such as jewwy a local Italian drink. I also suggest you eat at Dinnis Pizza Restaurant. As a pizza lover, I belive you will find delicious and affordable Italians’ famous pizza there.
You should drive by taxi, but pricey, since public transportation can be extremely difficult for non-Italian speakers.
I hope these suggestions have been helpful. If I can help in any ways please let me know.
See you soon.
Arya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pe these suggestions have been helpful. If I can help in any ways please let me kn...
^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lease let me know. See you soon. Arya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9689119171 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69666098274 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699481865285 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3245151884 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124403424247 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471256970131 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056021774025 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544410846097 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316161074844 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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