Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your apartment while you are gone Tell him where the keys are Tell him to take care of one thing while while you are away Tell him what to do on the way of your arrival

Dear Selin,

I am happy to hear that you will be able to visit Istanbul and stay with me. I am writing to let you know that I cannot be at home when you arrive but I did all arrangements so that you will have rest until I turn back.

I will leave keys to my neighbour who lives at fifth floor. I wrote her telephone number to you if you cannot reach her, you will be able to phone her. She is an old lady and will be happy to help you if you need anything else when you are here.

I would like you to water my plants at balcony since I will have been in Newyork for a week. Please be sure that all of them get enough water.

My flight is at 4 p.m and thus I will have been at home until 8 p.m. I will prepare curry chicken and fried rice which are your favourite meals. After dinner, we will watch the latest action movie and drink tasty wine which I purchased last year in Roma. If you have any suggestions, please let me know.

Hope to see you soon,
Best wishes,
Mary

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou will have rest until I turn back. I will leave keys to my neighbour who liv...
^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my neighbour who lives at fifth floor. I wrote her telephone number to you if yo...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... need anything else when you are here. I would like you to water my plants at b...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 3.96984924623 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90671569943 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9995138517 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119208692468 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505604126957 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313230788826 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727809847527 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331390043067 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.45 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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