Dear Sir,
This is to notify you that I am struggling with my laptop's performance this week which has reduced my work efficiency and performance badly. Last Friday, due to some Windows updates, the machine has been slowed down and sometimes it hangs in between and it takes at least half an hour to get it operational by restarting it.
As you know that as a software engineer, I am totally dependent on my system for my daily work and updates for the same. I am not able to attend our important customers' meetings and also, delivery of the new project has been delayed by a week due to this system issue. There is an escalation raised by the customer yesterday for the same.
I have already created an IT ticket for my problem and it requires your approval before the IT department entertains it. I would request you to approve the same and escalate it due to the highest priority as it's impacting our business.
Waiting for your prompt reply and the solution of my issue.
Sincerely,
PArm
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58659217877 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57050027756 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2712321846 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098439792374 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405570380515 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431682441874 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662018086353 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03100759915 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.