You are about to star social-meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:•What activities you have to planned•Wh

Essay topics:

You are about to star social-meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:
• What activities you have to planned
• When the first meeting takes place and where

Dear Sir,

I am Mohit Sharma, the president of the local Rotract Club. Our club is organising
seminars in which delegates from different nationalities will be taking part. We would
be very thankful if you would give adequate space about our activities in the columns
of your esteemed daily so that we get the maximum participation and support of local
people.

We shall be touching various social issues in our meetings. Besides the cultural
exchange, which shall automatically be there, we shall be touching issues like
environmental pollution, drug trafficking, child abuse, female foeticide and so on. We
have also planned a career counselling camp which shall run for a whole week.
The first meeting is on 10th June 2011; the venue is Club Cabana and the theme is
‘Global Culture versus Traditional Culture’. We would look forward to your presence in
this meeting.

All the club members are working whole heartedly for these meetings. It is a matter of
great pride for a small town like ours to organise such world class events. Through the
power of your pen, you can help us in spreading a word about our activities.

Thanking you in anticipation.

Yours faithfully,

Mohit Sharma

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22110552764 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83722526883 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673366834171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0711354195 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9230769231 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137038878556 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492168507455 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501987952934 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491859441083 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550228423025 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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