You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter Give details of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
- Give details of the job
- Explain why it is important to you
- Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Sir,
Hope everything is fine from your side. I have seen an advertisement for a job related to my profession. As you know I have done my Masters in Engineering from JNTU and also had good experience in a software company as a developer for 5years. Indeed, this job is also related to the same skill but as a manager. Accordingly, this job also helps me to get placed in a much-reputed company. Also, this my dream company to work with and I analysed the history of this company regarding its success story and drawbacks too.
However, this job is most important to me to get promoted to higher level. Also, If I get this job, I can use my leadership skills and problem-solving techniques which help this company to get more profits with fewer efforts. For this, I need your help to include your words as a proof of my knowledge and ability. At the same time, your reference can help me to get this job as you know me well from my childhood.
It would be pleasure for me if you give a letter of reference to this job. I will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Abc.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope everything is fine from your side. ...
^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as you know me well from my childhood. It would be pleasure for me if you give ...
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Abc.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42718446602 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65749987575 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0146492634 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217311168399 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09603132399 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803886674465 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179511492267 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831250415369 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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