You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss.
In the letter, you should:
tell him/her your decision
explain the reason for your decision.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to the advice provided by you to work as a full-time employee. First of all thanks for the offer, and I really appreciate the suggestion as I was having a same thought running in my mind since last few days.
As you are aware that I am also providing lectures to some economically backward students in an Non Profit Organization. I had a discussion with them on this subject. After a thorough discussion with the council and considering pros and cons of this offer, I have decided to follow the ongoing process of continuing the course and continue to work at the college on fixed term basis.
The main reason behind this decision is my passion of teaching. I want to dedicate my knowledge of the subject to the students who belong to economically backward section of the society, as a result every one can avail this free facility. There are several students who rely on my course for their final semester exams. Hence I consider pursuing parallelly.
Once again thanks for your offer, but I regret to take in this place. I hope it will not affect my part-time career in your organization.
Yours faithfully,
Harish
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...running in my mind since last few days. As you are aware that I am also providing ...
^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... some economically backward students in an Non Profit Organization. I had a discus...
^^
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ork at the college on fixed term basis. The main reason behind this decision is ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... course for their final semester exams. Hence I consider pursuing parallelly. Once...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Hence I consider pursuing parallelly. Once again thanks for your offer, but I ...
^^^
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret taking'.
Suggestion: regret taking
...Once again thanks for your offer, but I regret to take in this place. I hope it will not affe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o take in this place. I hope it will not affect my part-time career in your organ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, really, so, as a result, first of all, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71359223301 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7209463195 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0012400656 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225696703924 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081725597965 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775677487643 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127260631619 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810220068182 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.