You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– say where you are going
– describe your house
– explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house.
Dear Sam,
I will be taking my family on a vacation this summer. I am writing this letter to request you that can you please look after my house while in that period. Fortunately, I feel very relaxed that you are around while I will be away.
I am going on a family vacation to Bali from 1st Aug to 15th Aug. Recently I have done some reconstruction in which have a small garden and a car garage in the front of my house. Due to this, the entrance to my house is now from the front of the garden.
I would like to request you to take care of a couple of things. To water the garden, I have installed water sprinklers. If you could just turn them on everyday in the evening while coming back from office then it would help to water the plants. In addition, could you feed my dog everyday, I will be leaving my dog at the top floor of the house.
I would like to thank you for this help. In case of any emergencies, feel free to contact me on my mobile +91 99966622 or mail me at: abc@xyz.com
Best Regards,
Kaustubh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to look after my house while I am away. I thank you in advance and I am indeed ve...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you are around while I will be away. I going on a family vacation to Bali from...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...you are around while I will be away. I going on a family vacation to Bali from...
^
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...den, I have installed water sprinklers. If you could just turn them on everyday in...
^^
Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...inklers. If you could just turn them on everyday in the evening while coming back from o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...nts. In addition, could you feed my dog everyday, I will be leaving my dog at the top fl...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12254901961 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38251431714 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553921568627 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2295894802 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192744344962 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757214187509 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072823822497 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114454427337 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886870341435 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.