You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with both the food and service that your restaurant offered on October 15.
Two days ago, my company organized a meeting at your restaurant. We had reserved three tables for twenty guests in advance as usual, but the waiter had informed us that the chef was sick, and his assistant would be replacing him. However, on the occasion, he did not meet our expectations about main course. It seemed to be both overcooked and too spicy. My manager expressed his disappointment to me about it, as soon as the meeting was over, since it remained untouched. Furthermore, the service of the restaurant was lower than satisfactory. When I asked the administrator to talk about the main dish, the waiter refused to phone him justifying that he was on vacation.
It must be clear that my company is upset to have made the use of your service. Despite this unpleasant situation, I believe that we should continue to book places in your restaurant, as it is both located in the city center and well-decorated. As a solution, I would like you to write a letter of apology to my chief with a promise that it will not happen again.
I look forward to your reply. You could either email me at the following address tolikxxx@mail.ru or phone on the following number 87001444413.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your restaurant offered on October 15. Two days ago, my company organized a mee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89699570815 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98426186156 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1012286376 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192605574457 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591747457801 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457364322768 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942362563136 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434287957719 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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