You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself.
Dear Aunty Mercy,
Merry Christmas Uncle John and you.
I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas. I realize now it has been a while since I have shared a text with you. Because I am overloaded with my final year syllabus.
As a part of academic year-end project, I am preparing for a short stay to London city. As it is a Christmas season, hotel stay will be very expensive. Therefore, I would like to stay with Uncle and you for fortnight. I hope my interim stay would not be an inconvenience for you else kindly write back to me in advance so that I shall make some other arrangement. I also insist to pay for my food and stay as a token of love.
My humble request to you to share your willingness on my short stay at your home. Also, please feel free to ask anything you need it from Italy, I will be booking my tickets to depart on 9th December.
With love,
Sayu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le since I have shared a text with you. Because I am overloaded with my final year syll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47604738598 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3766891451 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270499861953 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948711359372 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709984819074 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159578829598 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711346016858 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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