You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Charlie,
I have recently opted for a Digital Banking course; it is a two weeks course. I am writing to you to grant me leave for two weeks to attend this intensive course regularly.
On my return from the short vacation, I will work overtime to fulfill the activities which may be pending from my side. However, I have discussed my interim vacation to my team member Bob to take care of any urgent activity pending for me on any particular day during my vacation and also, I will be available to respond to any escalation emails on every end-of-day.
Additionally, as we are moving forward to make our banking service towards Digitalization. It is thus the above-mentioned course that will enrich more ideas while representing our proof of concept to our higher management.
Thank you for your support and I look forward to seeing your approval.
Yours Faithfully,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90320895256 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.321769177 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137366720633 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672690938966 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624430721781 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091041301979 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747190283858 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.