You are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it Write a letter to your manager In your letter Ask for some time off to complete a qualification Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off Say how t

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Sir,
I am writing this to request you to consider leave for 2 weeks. I was an employee in your company in the production department. I have started learning a course related to displaying 4D view of objects. To complete this course, I need off time for 15 days. I have to submit my document regarding this course and need to give a presentation on this.
I have already discussed with my teammates about my leave, they accepted to do my work in my absence. I will be available for you in case any meetings and respond to the client mails from home in case of any urgency. After coming back, I will be working even at late hours and also come to office earlier than others. Also, I will try to complete my work within the time limit. My new learning course will help us in dealing the latest project efficiently which is under implementation.
I would be grateful for me if you consider my leave. I will be looking forward to hearing your response soon.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Abc.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to request you to cons...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y accepted to do my work in my absence. I will be available for you in case any m...
^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iciently which is under implementation. I would be grateful for me if you consid...
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Abc.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50819672131 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60159796722 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4711896673 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4615384615 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272566639688 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974043311084 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712480762769 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166028128803 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177721062261 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to request you to cons...
^^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y accepted to do my work in my absence. I will be available for you in case any m...
^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iciently which is under implementation. I would be grateful for me if you consid...
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Abc.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50819672131 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60159796722 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4711896673 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4615384615 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272566639688 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974043311084 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712480762769 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166028128803 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177721062261 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.