Dear John,
I am writing this letter in connection with the accommodation that you arranged for me is having noise problem and I would like to change to another room if possible.
The room itself is fine for me but during early morning before sunrise, the unstopped noise come from upstairs, such as loudly music or heavy steps. I recalled that you mentioned to me one of the problems of this acient house would have caused sound-proof problem. It is understandable for people to cook their food in the morning, but being quiet is controllable behaviour.
There is no any changes after I discussed with them last Sunday. I will so much appriciate that you could be able help me to talk them, volume down and walk it lightly in certain time. Otherwise, I prefer change to another room if the negociation cannot be done. Without ample sleep, my short course target in here is unachieveable.
Thank you in advance and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind reagards,
Joe
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... is controllable behaviour. There is no any changes after I discussed with them...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77325581395 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64285596827 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5202201252 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162318902904 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053523188541 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613896069245 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992589463848 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063469779981 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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