you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.-Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not

Essay topics:

you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport.

Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.
-Explain where you live
-describe the problem
-give reason why do not want his development

I am dweller of Chandigarh and live in sector 28. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to request you to donot develop the airport . Because many people's are not happy about this plan.

I am resident of Chandigarh sector 28. It is a huge area of Chandigarh and good businessmen are live there. Yesterday, I read the newspaper and saw the advertisement of Airport that is related to the development . The government take the season to develop the airport. Because this airport is smart and now is able to construct a big airport and increasing number of flights at my house distance is many kilometre from airport flights creating noise pollution and some other pollution that will able to affect the human body and I was happy from this decision.

The biggest thing is this the flight create more pollution and they cover big area. Many people houses are include the land of airport. So, The People's where can leave after left the house. So that's way I do not want develoment of airport. so I would be appreciate if you give adequate space for this article on your newspaper, so many people read this article and stand with me, after this maybe government should change decision you are a dirty about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...request you to donot develop the airport . Because many peoples are not happy abou...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uest you to donot develop the airport . Because many peoples are not happy about this p...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per and saw the advertisement of Airport that is related to the development . The...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...port that is related to the development . The government take the season to devel...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kilometre seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kilometres'.
Suggestion: many kilometres
...mber of flights at my house distance is many kilometre from airport flights creating noise pol...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... able to affect the human body and I was happy from this decision. The biggest...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
... cover big area. Many people houses are include the land of airport. So, The Peoples wh...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...here can leave after left the house. So thats way I do not want develoment of airport...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ay I do not want develoment of airport. so I would be appreciate if you give adequ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62711864407 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45359444435 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546610169492 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.7799413556 44.8134815571 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324469278908 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886860731432 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105951132944 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214566416028 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102004739592 0.0580467560999 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.