You are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. write a letter to complain about the same to city council. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe the situation
say what you want the officer to do for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, Manpreet Singh, a resident of SBS Nagar, Ludhiana, Punjab, am writing this letter to bring your kind attention towards the miserable condition of roads in my area.
To begin with, travelling in this vicinity has become pathetic. In fact, a number of potholes can be found on daily commute paths, which are not affecting the daily transportation, but also causing delay in timetable of school buses. As a result, children, youngsters, adults everyone is annoyed. In addition to it, at the time of rain, water gets accumulated in these potholes, which is the key reason for accidents on the road as well as giving the birth to dangerous diseases.
I have lodged many complaints with road maintenance department, but no response yet. I would be very grateful, if you can approve the orders to reconstruct these roads. For now, it would be much appreciable, if at least potholes can be fixed at the earliest.
Thank you for your consideration. I am looking ahead for a positive and swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Manpreet Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I, Manpreet Singh, a resident of SBS Nag...
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...esident of SBS Nagar, Ludhiana, Punjab, am writing this letter to bring your kind ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and swift response. Yours faithfully, Manpreet Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, at least, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87304491304 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707865168539 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2864815423 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174509968837 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704553036413 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829664525229 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107548308911 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616035408284 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.