You are working for a company You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this Write a letter to your manager In you letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your w

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In you letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am working round the clock from the past three months without taking an off even on Saturdays. This is because we had such a tight schedule and things had to be in line by this week. our hard work paid well and finally the project submission is over. I am writing this to ask for a permission to take 15 days leaves.

As you and entire team are aware about the work pressure we all had. All of us are responsible enough and that's why keeping in mind the seriousness of the project, we gave our 100%.

During this entire period, many staff members had some of the other family issues also. Understanding this, they took off turn by turn. Luckily, I didn't have any.So now, by taking off, I want to go and explore few places with family that I have never visited.

I have explained my daily task to Ritesh who is efficient to take over my work.Otherwise, I am always available through mail and can call me anytime. Mail response may get delayed due to network problem.

I am sure you will grant my leaves.

Yours faithfully,
Harish

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am working round the clock from the pa...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
... things had to be in line by this week. our hard work paid well and finally the pro...
^^^
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...d. All of us are responsible enough and thats why keeping in mind the seriousness of ...
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Line 8, column 51, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s entire period, many staff members had some of the other family issues also. Understanding...
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Line 8, column 83, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ers had some of the other family issues also. Understanding this, they took off turn...
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Line 8, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... they took off turn by turn. Luckily, I didnt have any.So now, by taking off, I want ...
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Line 8, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...turn by turn. Luckily, I didnt have any.So now, by taking off, I want to go and ex...
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Line 10, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Otherwise
...h who is efficient to take over my work.Otherwise, I am always available through mail and...
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Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l grant my leaves. Yours faithfully, Harish
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, may, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47448979592 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40688200955 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704081632653 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5146440335 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4615384615 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231074702468 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721196670375 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529429973885 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109844031798 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318374447912 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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