You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain the important event
• apologise for the situation
• suggest a new arrangement
Dear Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to sadly inform you about postponement of my visit to your home.
As you remember Tarannum, I had planned to meet you in the first week of the next month, April, and I was pretty excited for the same just like you. I know you have started making arrangements about my stay at you house already and you also said that you were cancelling all your tasks which you had scheduled for this month. However, there has been a sudden chain of happenings here in my family which has left me with no choice but to reframe my journey in the month of August.
I hope you remember my cousin Neena, whom you met last year when you came to my house in Shimla. Her parents have arranged her marriage on 15th of April and she is going to tie the knot with the person she loves since her high school. Being the only girl in the entire family, its very crucial for all of us to be a part of her marital ceremonies and bestow our blessings. As you know how close she is to my heart, I cannot describe how hard it is for me to part from the sadness of letting her go, although I am elated about her getting married.
Anyways, I am sure you understand how important it is for me to stay. But don’t you worry at all. Just another three months then I will be there with you for an entire 30 days duration. I have heard that the weather there in England is wonderful in August and the sight-seeing is awe-strucking. Therefore, it’s a win-win situation for both of us as you can now carry-out the tasks that you had planned for April and I can enjoy travelling with you in August, which could have been cumbersome in the snowy month of April.
Hope to see you soon and wishing you all the happiness and prosperity.
Yours sincerely, March 14th, 2019
Darpan Aneja
Comments
Only 5.0 bands?
Only 5.0 bands?
Can someone please tell me why so low bands?
Essay evaluation report
The e-grade gave it a low mark because you put 340 words in 20 minutes, which in the view of e-grade it is not possible:
No of words: 340.0 206.0 165% => Less content wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 341 350
No. of Characters: 1406 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.123 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.223 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.941 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.671 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.284 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... prosperity. Yours sincerely, March 14th, 2019 Darpan Aneja
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, however, so, then, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 32.9175257732 201% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 937.175257732 158% => OK
No of words: 340.0 206.0 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35588235294 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34379656816 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 127.690721649 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3755677543 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244458777731 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922258235553 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675913227709 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145192489232 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693464607945 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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